Your advice was soooo helpful. I tried to add more visual/action/descriptive details to ground the story more...and of course, that sparring/scar scene.
I pretty much took all of your advice, though I could not let go of Wallflower Lee as well a few other things. And, and, and, it was beyond hard to let go of "sepulchre." I'm still angsting a little bit about it.
You were so unbelievably helpful, and I'm so thankful we're now a pair. Nora/Deena fuhevah.
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Your advice was soooo helpful. I tried to add more visual/action/descriptive details to ground the story more...and of course, that sparring/scar scene.
I pretty much took all of your advice, though I could not let go of Wallflower Lee as well a few other things. And, and, and, it was beyond hard to let go of "sepulchre." I'm still angsting a little bit about it.
You were so unbelievably helpful, and I'm so thankful we're now a pair. Nora/Deena fuhevah.