Well, I loved this although I would have liked a little more wrap up. Maybe an epilogue?
I really enjoyed your descriptions of their emotions...from Lee swimming until he drowned (basically in Kara) to Kara describing how the baby wasn't real to her....it was all beautiful and the characterizations were spot on...
Poor Lee...hope that hole in his heart gets filled this time around.
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Date: 2011-12-24 04:51 am (UTC)I really enjoyed your descriptions of their emotions...from Lee swimming until he drowned (basically in Kara) to Kara describing how the baby wasn't real to her....it was all beautiful and the characterizations were spot on...
Poor Lee...hope that hole in his heart gets filled this time around.
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