Date: 2011-12-24 02:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kdbleu.livejournal.com
You wrapped things up very nicely. Kara's suicide attempt was so vivid and I really liked the way it tied into Lee thinking about swimming and Kara.

And I love Kara's explanation and the way Lee doesn't try to comfort her or tell her it's going to be all right. He just hopes. :)
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