Other people have said such nice things, dissecting your story and talking about lofty literary stuff. I can't do that - I read and either enjoy or I don't. I rarely can you know, compare thee to a summer's day or some crap. But...
I really liked this bit, where we see a confident, dare I say cocky, side of Lee that stayed hidden away most of the time in canon:
“Did you know that my favorite pastime is hearing you beg for my cock?” he asks. “I wonder if I could get you to do it tonight. What do you think the chances of that happening are? If I lick you until you come, screaming, then kiss my way up your body, touching you everywhere with my tongue and my fingers, my cock pushing inside you just barely, then pulling out, would that be enough you think to make you beg for it?”
And like Kara, just him saying that would probably be enough for me to at least think about begging already. lol
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Date: 2013-03-11 05:50 am (UTC)I really liked this bit, where we see a confident, dare I say cocky, side of Lee that stayed hidden away most of the time in canon:
“Did you know that my favorite pastime is hearing you beg for my cock?” he asks. “I wonder if I could get you to do it tonight. What do you think the chances of that happening are? If I lick you until you come, screaming, then kiss my way up your body, touching you everywhere with my tongue and my fingers, my cock pushing inside you just barely, then pulling out, would that be enough you think to make you beg for it?”
And like Kara, just him saying that would probably be enough for me to at least think about begging already. lol