Date: 2012-03-23 03:46 pm (UTC)
I have such a thing for childhood/teen BFF pilots. <3 The notes were adorable and I really loved this bit:

"I actually only came here to tell you how much I hate you," Lee whispers, his nose buried in Kara's hair.

"I know," she says. "That's why I grabbed you first. I knew not even your grudge-holding abilities could win out against my death grip."

"Gods, Kara," he says.

"Don't let go of me, okay?" she says. "Not yet. Be angry later. I promise I'll let you. Just - not now. Not right now."


<3 <3 <3

I really love symmetrical endings too so I loved that her last line (in the story) is also her first line to him. Nice job.
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